Writing the Perfect Picture book

When people find out I write children’s books, particularly picture books, they often tell me that they have a great idea for a picture book but have questions about the process. Can I answer a few questions, they ask.

Before they can ask me, I ask them a couple of questions. Have you read any picture book lately?

Oh, sure, they say, I read my kids all the Dr. Seuss books when they were little. And I took my grandkids to see the movie 'Where the Wild Things Are.'

But, I ask, have you read any picture books published recently? They often have not.

Then I ask if they have actually written the book. Again, I often hear “No, it’s an idea I have.”

The Writing.

People think writing a picture book is easy. It’s only 500 – 1000 words. No problem. But the very brevity of picture books is what makes them so difficult to do well.

Let’s say you write an 80,000-word adult novel. If 5% of the writing is weak, which doesn’t seem so horrible (a 95% success, that’s a grade of A), that means you have 4,000 poorly-chosen words (or badly constructed sentences) an average of one or two per page of 200 words.

If 5% of your writing on an 800-word picture book is weak, you’ll have 40 bad words, more than one on a page with only 30 words or less on it. While it’s the same percentage, they will stand out more far more obviously.

I tell them to go to the library or a book store and read dozens of picture books. See what works; learn why they were good enough to get published.

Most publishers want their picture books to cover 24 pages. While they generally do not want you to indicate the page breaks, you have to think in terms of 24 pages (or 28 or 32, whatever the publisher’s guidelines state). Publishers will state on their web pages word count and preferred page length, so make darn sure you adhere to those guidelines.

Check Age-Appropriateness.

Let an elementary teacher read your picture book. Take her criticism seriously. Read it to a child of the appropriate age. Take his comments seriously, but remember that a young child won’t use the words an adult would. You need to learn to understand child-speak and note their facial expressions and body language as you read it. Having trouble doing that? Then why are you writing books for young children?

Write and rewrite it. My first picture book, only 800 words, took me five years to get what I felt were the exact right words for it.

Make sure it is appropriate for the age you intend it for. While it may sound perfectly clear and understandable to you, you are not a six-year-old child. One of my most used reference books, when I write for kids, is “Children’s Writer’s Word Book” by Alijandra Mogilner. It lists common words understandable by grade level. Think of this book as a thesaurus for child-compatible words. It gives alternative words to use for other grade levels. Suppose you use the word novel, as in new or unusual. ‘Novel’ is a 5^th-grade word used in that context, so if you put it in a book meant for 1^st graders, they won’t know what it means. The book suggests ‘new’ for kindergarteners, ‘latest’ for 1^st grade, ‘fresh’ or ‘modern’ for 2^nd graders, and so on. Each of those can be looked up to possibly give you more options.

Will Your Audience Understand It?

When you are done with your first draft, and indeed after every draft, run the story through a readability checker. Several can be found online, like http://datayze.com/readability-analyzer.php.  Or, here, you can find 10 different readability calculators: https://www.wyliecomm.com/2018/11/10-free-readability-calculators/. Try them all on the same piece of writing, see which ones help you the most.

Illustrating It.

Perhaps the most-asked question I get from would-be picture book authors is where do I fond my illustrators. I do not find illustrators. My books are published by a full-service indie press, and they have in-house illustrators. And, in general, you do not want to provide illustrations with your book. That just gives publishers two possible reasons to reject your book. If you or your friend who draws as a hobby have no experience illustrating picture books, you are not likely to provide illustrations the publisher wants.

As you write your books, you do have to think in pictures, even if your pictures are nothing like what the illustrator eventually comes up with. Make sure the story has action in it, action that can be illustrated. If you write a story where the same picture works for several pages, the publisher won’t want it and the illustrator won’t want to illustrate it. Picture books are really two books in one, the words and the pictures. And if you’re a 6-year-old kid, which will be more important to you? Make sure your picture book allows for interesting, varied, and exciting pictures.

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Bio.

I currently have 5 published books for children, with three more currently in the illustration stage with my publisher, 4RV Publishing. I spent 40 years as the director of a planetarium where I brought the wonders of the universe to audience members from 4 to 104. I have raised four children, my best audience and greatest critics.